Thursday, May 5, 2016

A Critique of a Qualitative Journal Article (II)

Andrade, M. S. (2008). International student persistence at a faith-based institution. Christian Higher Education, 7(5), 434-451.

Andrade (2008) explored “the experiences of international students in their senior year at a faith-based institution to identify persistence factors” because the author argued that dominant persistent studies were inadequate to explain the behaviors of international students in America (p. 434).  For example, previous research missed some critical factors such as adjustment needs of international students to American pedagogical styles and cultures, social (relational) needs from their isolation and loneness, and academic needs to overcome difficulties with comprehension of lectures. 

In order to understand the persistence of international students, Andrade (2008) reviewed several previous studies regarding “perspectives of cultural integration and campus climate that were particularly relevant to international student persistence” (p. 436).  As institutional factors that related to educational persistence of international students, the precollege experiences or situations, academic aptitude, academic motivation, and sense of belonging in school were revised for the literature review in this study.  Especially, studies of religious (spiritual) involvement and family relationship effects were (both negatively and positively) were reviewed as international students’ (inner) self-development.  These previous literatures were well organized; however, studies of diversity, unequal social structure, and economic obstacles that were considered as significant factors of persistence were not included in this research (Tinto, 1993, 1997).

Andrade (2008) selected 17 international senior students related to Church or mission organizations (53% from Pacific Island and 47% from Asian countries) at a university in Hawaii.  The researcher used in-depth face-to-face interviews that began with “a grand tour question” (background, personal characteristics, and university itself) and specific questions (p. 438).  Interview procedures including recoding, transcribing for data analysis and identification of common themes were well described for the research design.  The central research question of the study was “how have students’ home and educational backgrounds, experiences at the university, and personal characteristics influenced their persistence?” (p. 438).  The research questions logically related to the purpose statement.

In the findings section of the research, data analysis was clearly presented with six major themes: “vision of the future, home and educational background, spirituality, validation, attitudes and abilities, and institutional engagement” (p. 439).  Each theme contains detailed observation results in the following subcategories: 1) ‘forming future visions that were influenced by personal experiences, parents, and religious missions were important for the value of education; 2) home and educational background played a role in students’ desires for further education; 3) spirituality permeated all aspects of the students’ lives; 4) validation from parents, family members, peers, professors, staff, and church leaders provided both external and internal supports; 5) learning attitudes and abilities were important to have positive mindset and self-motivation; and 6) institutional engagements such as courses, support services, programs, and extracurricular activities contributed on the spiritual life’ (pp. 440-447).


Andrade (2008) is fundamentally based on descriptive statements gathered through interviews and excludes the researcher’s assumptions or biases.  Only in the discussion section, the researcher includes subjectivity and personal thoughts to give a deeper understanding of the facts discovered through the interviews.  If the research used the previous studies (that he wrote in the literature review section in this study) at this finding and discussion section, it was useful to minimize bias of the facts and ensure the validity of his personal discoveries.  Another weakness was implication section of this research.  Of course, results of this study could not be generalized to all international students in Unites States because this research was of a small number of students in a particular school.  However, if the researcher provided some specific implications for how the institution welcomes, supports, and validates international students, it would be helpful educational leaders and administrators.  On the basis of the purpose statement and research questions, except these weaknesses, this article was generally well-organized with an appropriate literature review, sampling, and research method.   

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